What's happening

poem by: Dejali Rios
Written on Apr 12, 2015 

Water so deep 
so cold
I'm swimming 
but not moving
can't talk or breath
help me please
I am dieing slowly
what's happening
to me
water so deep
dieing so cold
what's happening 
to me

 

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mr. chap commented:
Jeesh Too many sad poems. By which all of them are great tho
mr. chap commented:
Oh, ur the same guy who wrote So Cute and Shy. Cool. See that ur still online. cool cool. Guess it's ur style of poetry. Very good. Makes some very unique and meaningful poems.

 

 

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