Cloak
poem by:
D'Vina Dietrich
Written
on Apr 05, 2020
She wears a cloak It's dark and mysterious She hides her face And her feelings Scars and pain All beneath it. When the hood comes off A beautiful broken woman She has the wrinkles Of many tears cried A perfectly faked smile Plastered to a hurt soul Her eyes bright with Guilt, remorse, loss The hood back on Quicker then it came off She continues her adventure Standing tall Yet, hiding her beautiful self. Hiding from the world The cloak is her safety Away from vulnerability. Never trusting and Never loving She will never take it off Why should she?
Tags: Sad, Depressing, Pain, Dark, Imagery, Fear, Deep,
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Christopher Russon commented on Apr 05, 2020 at 5:26pm
Really well written poem.love it.
k river
commented on Jul 27, 2020 at 5:41am
Your poem is interesting and has a lot of depth to it. In the eighth stanza the word used is "then". It should be the word "than" instead there is a big difference in the meaning of the two words even though they are spelled in a very similar way. Other than that, the write is pretty good.
Best regards,
K River
