Sleep

poem by: Edgy Boiii
Written on Jan 21, 2020 

Sleep an eternity of life
Yet to live with your eyes closed
Their problem to them unknown
Until they find their hidden strife 
Some will wish to see yet they won't
For awakening can not be taught

 

Tags: Sad, Anger, Metaphor, Dark, Abstract, Deep,

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Roxanne Dubarry commented on Feb 13, 2020 at 9:18pm
We view the world sometimes with our eyes closed. Blinding us about our problems, by failure to confront them. Strife is hidden and concealed. People may wish for their own" awakening but it can not be taught. Profound and brief poem with an earnest message.

 

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