Twenty minus twenty

poem by: Eladriel Nokk
Written on Jul 25, 2018

He was a man of twenty
    A life well lived

    The problem?

The lines get blurry
    On how he did
    
    The time.

The clock hands moving
    A circuit of passing

    The effect.

The people’s heads turning
    It’s all different now

    The act.

The man’s passions burning
     Flying through the crowd

    The proof.

Did it cost you anything?
    A commitment
    
    The regret.

     Or simply a warning
    Admonishment

    The caution.

Your path is wrong
    Your age is right

    The clue? 

You can’t find sleep
    On any night

    The truth.

He steps to you
    Holding up the light
    
    The push.

You want nothing more
    Than to hold him tight

    The admission.


His life flashes before your eyes
    You can’t stop it

    The Mistake.

His life is his own
    Even to take

    The tragedy.

Your choices soar by
    You can’t stop it
    
    The theft.

His heart is kept
    Even though you lost it

    The crime.

The winds change direction
    Their heads are now turned

    The problem.

His hopes and wishes
    Now mercilessly burned

    The end.

 

Tags: Sad, Love, Depressing, Dark,

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Christopher Russon commented on Mar 02, 2019 at 10:18pm
Well written indeed

 

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