You kind of gave me something
poem by:
Gabriela Fuentes
Written
on Nov 18, 2017
You kind of gave me something I tried to give it back We kind of had passion We couldn’t hold it back I gave you too many Too much You gave me Too little and no love Kind off fool No Fool at all Kind of messy No Idiot Yes Won’t wish for you I wish me the best I kind of believed my own lies And honey that’s nothing, nothing wow Kind of try to think not about But you mess with heart once in a while Can we not talk about? Can we leave without? Can we start now? Words way messy No they don’t The lies are Indeed we hide No head, stop it right there Shall we never ever? Leave it there Leave it there Honey I don’t want more mess Look around What do see Another mess I made out of me Mind goes Life goes Tried to loose my soul You helped Oh no thanks I kind of don’t want me anymore But is it true Is it gold? Come honey sit down Listen neither do I But I stopped and looked at signs they told me I freaked I smiled I turned into whom I was The truest, the better, the search or whomever Thinks and blinks Whom I believed? You kind of gave me something I rather not keep.
Tags: Pain, Hate, Abstract, Confused, Depressing, Metaphor, Anger, Beat, Love, Sad, Weird, Deep,
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Janet Vick commented on Nov 20, 2017 at 11:21am
I can feel the confusion and anger in these words. Someone you wanted to believe but in the end, couldn't... Janet
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 20, 2017 at 1:26pm
Sounds like you really have been hurt......try to not get depressed.....put hurt into verse....and it won't get worse...
Christopher Russon
commented on Dec 03, 2017 at 10:35am
It seems you needed to exspress your feelings.Well written poem .
Jazz Force
commented on Dec 08, 2017 at 1:26am
I like the emotions
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 02, 2018 at 5:38am
nice use of expressions
James Notley
commented on Jun 16, 2020 at 4:47am
You jumped in feet first... always happens with a one-way love...you dropped your defenses and was crushed... sorry....It takes along time to repair the bruises .....Write on
