Greatness Defined
poem by:
Benjie Mthethwa
Written
on Nov 22, 2012
Epic gravity projected into man kind.mind shifts crushing your skull into different particals. I panitrate your ear with this poem that moves the ribcage leaving your lower limbs parilized with this continius sound wave of greatness. I send electrical impulses through your entire deformed structure,punchlines that shatter glass,as pause and write in metaphor's. I am the summer and the winter in every breath,the past and the present in this life time like no other delivered to PERFECT,Cutastrophy lyrically leaving them broken down spiritually,physically scorching they backs leaving shivers down they spine from someone they came to undermine GREATNESS DEFINED. I give you this poem like a book with similes for i am poetry's love child from begining to ending
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Benjie Mthethwa commented:
This is who i am Gods gift to earth
Trevor Cartwright
commented:
Benjie,
That is a pretty epic piece! You should use those lyrics to compose a heavy metal song. I think that it would be awesome.
L.N. Van Der Hyte
commented:
Pretty good, it's very passioante and honest, to me it sounds like a middle finger to those that are scum and dishonest. Good job
Benjie Mthethwa
commented:
This is a poem I wrote when I got chased out my poetry club,so it is like a middle finger in a creative way
Shanta
commented:
I think you should continue to run!
Quiana Beco
commented:
Deep
