WITHOUT YOU
poem by:
Nicho Mose
Written
on Feb 25, 2017
Copyright © 2016. Falling... In upright position Your seemingly solid character Yanked from under my big feet I'm forever long alone: in two minutes My eyes now opened In shock: still falling, slowly though Consciously melancholy, thinking back, Yet completely ignorant of: Who? Why? When? Why? Where am I ever going to land? These strong feet and stand tall again: Without you?
Tags: sad, love, deep, confused, hope,
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Geoffrey Brewer commented:
Expressive metaphors used to good effect.
Nicho Mose
commented:
Ah...the confusion created by falling... Thanks.
Maria Williams
commented:
Ahhh, the highs and lows of LOVE, soaring one day, crumbling the next. You have a way with words.Falling...in upright position, brilliant.
Nicho Mose
commented:
writing is only half...the other half is: sharing. Thanks!
Cecilia Crasto
commented:
And I hope you continue to share your talent...marvelous.
Edward shields
commented:
Deep & strange.
Paris Marceau
commented:
Very short and sweet, this poem is quite deep and makes me feel a little sad when I read it. Well done.
Robert Kohlhammer
commented:
I can imagine this being read out aloud and gaining recognition.
