She Danced To Love
poem by:
Maria Williams
Written
on Feb 20, 2017
She danced with wild abandon, she danced without a care With sun kissed skin and arms flung wide Wild flowers in her hair I chanced upon this secret glade while walking early morn A sacred aura surrounded it, a jewel in the dawn A type of place where Angels dwell A place of Hopes and Dreams A magical place of lush green plants and sparkling bubbly streams I drew back lest she saw me I dared not break the spell The Autumn leaves swirled all around her, and to the ground they fell Like homage to a Goddess, that she must surely be For Gods to but gaze on, not mortals such as me So fast was she as she whirled around, I could scarcely see her feet But even though I stood afar, I knew she gave off heat And then her tempo slowed right down, the air became quite chill The Elements were but her slaves, she ordered them at will I could have watched forever, so mesmerised was I What would I give to dance with you I murmured with a sigh To dance with wild abandon with this Angel from above A hundred birds would sing out loud to watch us Dance to Love.
Tags: happy, rhyme, beat, wishful,
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Cecilia Crasto commented:
Wow that is inspirational Maria, I could picture the girl dancing and I too was mesmerised, just loved it; you are truly talented and I hope we get to read more of your work.
Christopher Russon
commented:
In a word awesome.well written.
Maria Williams
commented:
I've read all your work Cecilia, you are a true talent and coming from you I will take this as a Huge Compliment.
Maria Williams
commented:
Thank you Christopher for your kind words. I'm a great fan of your work as well
Martin Williams
commented:
OMG..this poem gives me goose bumps!.. its written in such a way that it takes you can visualise this heavenly place..(A type of place where Angels dwell A place of Hopes and Dreams)
Very nice reading..Keep them comingm
Louise Wyatt
commented:
Very inspiration. Keep writing!
A previous user
commented:
Not bad
Maria Williams
commented:
Thank you Louisa for your kind words.
Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Marvellous poem with an energy of its own; flowing, with rhyth and rhyme, and a tempo that reflects the narrative and imagery. Delightful!
Maria Williams
commented:
Thank you so much Martin for you lovely comments. The fact that this poem gave you goose bumps makes me happy because it took you to that place that I visualized. Lol, we have the same surname .
Maria Williams
commented:
Thank you so much Geoffrey, I love your poems, so coming from you this is a feather in my cap.Its a little bit different to my usual style, I tend to write about real life situations, so sometimes reaches epic proportions, but hope to work on cutting some of it down and submitting .
Frank Hornby .
commented:
Lovely fantasy poem Maria......I can see that glade....a vivid picture in my mind......a real talent....
Maria Williams
commented:
Thank you so much Frank
Piya Paul Mudgal
commented:
That's so divine..Great Poem
Misti D Lovelace
commented on Oct 20, 2018 at 9:03pm
I like it a lot
