Sally Hinman
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I think this is an amazing poem - I just hope it did not come about because of something sad that has happened to you.
Tonya Fischer
commented:
Wonderful and very sad,it brought tears to my eyes
A previous user
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Sad. Lonely. Nicely written
K Alexander
commented:
Beautifully written
Tony Anderson
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Awesome, Awesome write
Lewis Smith
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This Poem is beautiful great work, I felt like I was right there the whole time watching it consume you
rebeka Philips
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Sad but nice.
Allison Green
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It is beautifully tragic. It made me feel and rhymed well. Genuinely a wonderful poem.