Christopher Russon
commented:
Wow.words with an unexpected twist.well written poem.
Royce B
commented:
Something everyone should understand. Thank you for sharing
Rod Moffat
commented:
Shannen, your short well crafted poignant word journey brought me into your description of a "perfect friend"... Then what a great positive ending with a simple but provocative twist. Really like your style.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 02, 2018 at 7:38am
nice poem i really enjoyed reading it
A previous user
commented on Feb 21, 2018 at 9:54pm
Oh wow... This really is good :)