Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Yes Obama and Hillary have a lot to answer for.
Aidan Fashena
commented:
I like this poem for a several reasons. The first is that it's very topical and addresses what a lot people are fearing. Secondly, although I'm terrible at scanning English verse, it seems like you did a good job of sticking to a metrical pattern in addition to having a consistent rhyme scheme.
Thirdly, I like the symmetry of your stanzas, not just with the meter and rhyme but how you always include vivid imagery concisely phrased in each stanza's third line with more abstract imagery in its surrounding lines.