Lost
poem by:
P Mason
Written
on Oct 08, 2016
Suddenly, you left as quickly as you arrived In Between you sent notes, touched, came Close enough to taste, smell, kiss, feel, love and Then vanish. You turned to ice as quickly as you exposed your warmth and tenderness leaving me lost, sad, weeping and alone. We talked, touched, felt warm with each other. And then you shut down. One morning you ran to my home. Across a wide river, across a marsh and up my hill only to stand never come to my open door as I lay awake waiting then turned and ran back across the marsh and river and away from what I desired.
Tags: sad, love, depressing, confused, sad, love, rhyme, deep,
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P Mason commented:
I have absolutely no idea about writing a poem, but this is entertaining.
Cecilia Crasto
commented:
You will only get better with practice, and this is a pretty good start.
Christopher Russon
commented:
there are no rules to poetry except never belittle your work.
celebrate it lnstead.looking forward to reading more of your
future poems.well done with this one.
A previous user
commented on Jun 11, 2018 at 10:04pm
This made me cry
