Mum not in this life
poem by:
Ceri Baylis
Written
on Feb 01, 2016
There’s an empty hole Left behind Heartache and sorrow are entwined In every action, thought and feeling I have A big part is missing since you have passed Sadness tainting memories with lost hope Externally showing to all I can cope To be true to myself I allow myself time Whist I dwell on the past or write out a rhyme Thinking over the Times that I would change A thought keeps me going although it is strange I concentrate hard on all you endured That you were surviving life: you weren’t for this world In this life you had given all that you had and lost so much more especially dad Without dad you couldn’t live life as intended ….. To continue forward with a mind and soul mended I pray that now you have reached your eternal resting place And its filled with everything life wasn't and its easier to take
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Christopher Russon commented:
Very good poem one of hope dispute loss.
commented:
Good poem. very powerful emotion.
Fauxcroft wade
commented:
heartbreaking and full of sadness and yearning. Been there and know the feeling of such pain.
Edward shields
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Sad poem, not well written, it's all over the place?
The Wave Poet
commented on Feb 14, 2018 at 10:09pm
Heartbreaking
The Wave Poet
commented on Feb 14, 2018 at 10:09pm
Heartbreaking, emotions are well transmitted.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Mar 07, 2018 at 7:05pm
The love for your mother comes over in your poem.......lovely...
