Purple Couch
commented:
This is a wonderful poem. This is the type of poetry we are looking for for our next publication. if you are interested in having this poem published please check out our future projects. http://www.purplecouchpublishing.com/#!future-projects/utwgq
Christopher Russon
commented:
Wow .you must keep writing.
You really have a passion for poetry.
The joy of poetry is the words change every time you look at them
They become like individuals they seem to take on their own form.
Edward shields
commented:
My 7 year old son, could write bettor.
Maria Williams
commented:
I love these type of poems . Please keep writing