Stay With Me
poem by:
Wendy Phelan
Written
on Oct 24, 2015
What I feel for you is perfect, Alas, my love I'm not There's more to me than your eyes can see Priceless, without cost Our love is absolute, always meant to be, I want to get lost in your eyes Go wherever love will send me I gladly surrender to your charms Let the satisfaction be too much I want to die in your tender arms To be re-awakened by your touch You are a memory, a dream, a familiar soul Quickening the beat of my famished heart Please stay with me until we are tired and old Our spirits farewell only flesh, we'll never part We'll remain happy, sated, wild and free Stay with me my darling for it's always you for me So we haven't been to heaven yet? I think I disagree!
Tags: happy, love, rhyme, inspirational, deep,
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Timothy Nelson commented:
Nice rhyme and coloring. Your words carried me through the nourishing that it seemed your heart desired. Good story line. "Clarksdalepoet"
Purple Couch
commented:
This is a wonderful poem. This is the type of poetry we are looking for for our next publication. if you are interested in having this poem published please check out our future projects. http://www.purplecouchpublishing.com/#!future-projects/utwgq
Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely words l want to get lost in your eyes
Tony Anderson
commented:
Wonderfully expressive write
Wendy Phelan
commented:
Thank you for your feedback, I am chuffed to be honest. Timothy you read something I might not have paid enough attention to and Clarksdalepoet, wow, that's something I'll remain humbled by.
I loved your comments, Christopher and Tony, thank you.
Ja Ja
commented:
Love is perfection. Thank you for sharing these thoughts
Ja Ja
commented:
Love is perfection. Thank you for sharing these thoughts
