mr. chap
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uummm.......uuuuuuuhhh.....what the heecck did I just read?? O_O....I don't understand too much into poetry but I do think that you have to keep such subjects pretty hidden. Also, I personally don't like cussing in poems unless it's for humor, but otherwise, just keep it in good taste. Always.You have to be poetic about such issues. Whatever the heck you were talking about, just be more subtle...please...
Ben dowell
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Striking poem ! Filled with the ordure of things to come
Frank Hornby .
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Disturbing....sick words uncalled for ...masquerading as poetry.......