Sara Pennada
commented:
Beautifully written!
craig croyle
commented:
i understand the pain and anger
Elizabeth Ladji
commented:
I'm hiding and I know the pain.
Q. Ramirez
commented:
As I have stated to another poet, try living 59 years with Cerebral Palsy and have a mind as sharp as what you have now. Feel blessed, love life.
Rod Moffat
commented:
Great poem... certainly reflects some serious dwelling on words to express. Hope sharing has helped.
You ask in your poem "As we walk through the fires tell me what you see"... I see a beautiful spirit that has been profoundly hurt, but not beyond repair... I sense an incredible strength from within.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Love this poem.