Milton Robertson
commented:
This is very good D'Vina. I love happy ending. Lovely.
J J
commented:
Very nice and well put. I can relate to 'being used' by the vultures of society that sit and wait for those willing to give, share, and feel. Vultures that rip the meat from the bones then leave - laughing and sneering.
Am I close in my perceptions of your write? Nice write.
Edward shields
commented:
Not bad.
Christopher Russon
commented on Oct 05, 2017 at 9:20pm
Excelent .you write really well I love this poem.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 7:22am
nice one
James Notley
commented on Jun 16, 2020 at 4:28am
Falling out of love and falling into love, the pain, the passion. the ice and the fire....write on