REALITIES
poem by:
Pat Hoban
Written
on Apr 17, 2015
REALITIES MORE SUPERNATURAL THAN YOUR WILDEST FANTASIES ARTIFICIAL YOU SEE HERE WE EXIST BY GOVERNING BODIES LAWS PHYSICAL MATTER ACTUALITY UNIVERSE EQUATIONS AND MATH THOSE WHO THINK ITS ALL CHAOTIC HAVENT ANY CRITERIA BECAUSE THERE WOULD BE NO STRUCTURE FOR US OR SO CALLED BY US THEREFORE THAT ARGUMENT IF TRUE COULD NEVER TO HAVE COME INTO EXISTENCE SO THEREFORE FAITH AND BELIEF HOWEVER COMPLICATED IN HIGHER ENTERTIES IS THE ONLY YET NOT ONLY ORDER SUPERNATURAL EVEN HOLY AS THE SCIENTIST KEEP REDISCOVERING IS THE UNIVERSE IS A MIRACLE SO NONE BELIEVERS WALK AROUND SO FLIPPENTLY BLIND NEVER TO EXIST IN THE GREATER PICTURE OF LETS SAY TIME SO THE SECOND LAW OF THEMO DYNAMICS IS UNTRUE BECAUSE THE AIR IS ALSO ESSENTIAL ORDER THAT WE HAVE PROOF OF EXISTENCE YET SHES NOT FLESH AND BLOOD BONE PROBABLY THE MOST CHAOTIC FORCES SCIENCE OFFERS STILL IS APPARENT IN OUR UNIVERSE THEN WHAT LAWS ARE KEEPING THEM IN EXISTENCE IF ITS WHITNESSED BY EXISTING REALITY THEN THE ORDER TO ME BECOMES RESPONSIBILITY ITS FOUNDED ENTITY DOESNT CEASE TO EXIST BECAUSE ITS NOT SKIN FLESH BLOOD AND BONE WE HUMANS ARE FOR TO UNACCOMMODATEING TO BE CLASSED AS PERFECT VESSELS BUT WHO IS TO KNOW OUR BLOOD IS NOT OF VESSELS AND LOOK HOW COMPLEX OUR D.N.A.IS DOES OUR BLOOD RECIEVE VERIFICATION IN OUR BRAIN SOMETHING AS AMAZING AS CONCIOUSNESS SO FAITHLESSNESS IS SLEEPING NO VARIFICATION TO REACH HIGHER STATE OF BEING MY OPPINION IS THAT AS SMALL AS IT AS GREAT AS IT IS IN BEING MY OPINION COMBINING IT ALL TOGETHER THAT BRINGS ALL WE KNOW INTO EXISTENCE THEREFORE EVERY VIBRATION OF MOTION COMMON SENSE IS GREATER THAN SCIENCE IS ONE HAS FAITH THE FACT ANY THING EXISTS IS PROOF OF GOD WHERE WOULD ANYTHING BE WITHOUT ORDER THAT STRUCTURALLY SUPPORTS IT ALL WHAT WOULD BE THE FIRST PATTERN ACCUMULATED AND MORE IMPORTANTLY WHAT WOULD BE THE OVERIDING PRIMARY EMOTION FOR GOD TO BRING INTO BEING IF NOT LOVE NOW HOW DOES THAT SIT IN YOUR CONCIOUS HOW WOULD YOU CHANGE THE THINGS FOR THE GREATER NEED GOOD OF LOVE AND WHAT IF YOU NEED LOVE TO RECOGNISE SOUL INFACT HOW CAN ONE COMPREHEND LOVE IF NOT FOR THE LOVE OF GOD.
Tags: love, anger, inspirational, scary, hope,
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mr. chap commented:
I like your poem, but do not do ANYTHING, whether a story or a poem, in all caps. It's basically the equivalent of YELLING REALLY LOUDLY ALL THE TIME EVERYTIME!! ARE YOUR EARS BLEEDING YET!! Either way, I like your message. It's exactly what I agree on. But you know what, there are so many scientist that are coming into the conclusion that god exists. It's a beautiful thing, if you ask me. Excellent poetic talents, this is just a nitpick, everything else is great. And also another minute nitpick, keep your poems in short stanzas
Stanzas are like this
They are so much easier than bananas
See what I did there? Otherwise, absolutely brilliant.
mr. chap
commented:
Oops, it didn't do stanzas correctly. Oh well, check out The Nothing Poem and anything by T. Moose. They're great poems and showcase stanzas extremely well. I really don't mean to appear a certain way, I just...have aspergers and I really am trying not to appear a complete and total you know what. I respect any poet, and I just..Have a rolemodel that is a critic, so just please understand. I think your poem's great, I really do.
mr. chap
commented:
I like your poem, but do not do ANYTHING, whether a story or a poem, in all caps. It's basically the equivalent of YELLING REALLY LOUDLY ALL THE TIME EVERYTIME!! ARE YOUR EARS BLEEDING YET!! Either way, I like your message. It's exactly what I agree on. But you know what, there are so many scientist that are coming into the conclusion that god exists. It's a beautiful thing, if you ask me. Excellent poetic talents, this is just a nitpick, everything else is great. And also another minute nitpick, keep your poems in short stanzas
Stanzas are like this
They are so much easier than bananas
See what I did there? Otherwise, absolutely brilliant.
