Milton Robertson
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When you get tired of feeling lost and confused, not knowing what to do caused you've tried everything and nothing worked for you, still you keep trying but keep finding your self at odds. Be Still, And Know That I Am GOD. PS.46:10 It works. if thing are not working for you no matter how hard you try, STOP ask Him.
Christopher Russon
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Well written poem.on A positive when down for a long time the only way is up
Shanta
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The ego cries - the soul laughs - time to wake up!
Fauxcroft wade
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Beautiful and powerful
Michael Wise
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I can so easily relate. Take it from me, men feel these things too. Nice writing. :)