Cecilia Crasto
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Great poem, you have summed up exactly what is happening in the world today-the divide between rich and poor is a big problem and we can only hope for a better future.
Josh Rogan
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Unless there is a Birkenhead in the States, then I assume this is 'over the water' from me, here in Liverpool. Good observation, well put, but, as with our side, things WILL get better.
Geoffrey Brewer
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A powerfully descriptive and well constructed poem with a positive message. You have a great, creative skill with words.
Ultan Mulhern
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Thanks for the encouraging comments, everyone. Much appreciated!
John Pegg
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I've never been to Birkenhead but I almost feel like I know it from your poem. A great outlook on the future convincingly conveyed in your poem. Very much enjoyed.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 11, 2018 at 5:13pm
I must admit Birkenhead does seem a bit lifeless, ever since Cammell Lairds wound down its ship building ....but as for "ashen faced people,with eyes lifeless, and cold"....no merseysiders eyes can ever be described as lifeless, and cold........good poem though...