The Voice In The Closet

story by: Millie Blagden
Written on Jun 19, 2015

My Friend Told Me This Story 3 Years Ago.

I was moving houses with my Boyfriend. We will Call Him Tim For Now. Me And Tim Bought A house recently and we were moving in this day. We found this house on rightmove, The Street was called Hant Street and we had lovely neighbors.

One night i heard voice saying my name I heard it calling from the closet, 'Samantha? Samanthaaa? We Are In Here! Let Us Out! Please? Join us...' I didnt open it,  why should I, You Know on tv when they HAVE To find out whats inside?! Well I DID NOT I heard it again, this time it sounded like my friend Kira 'Sammie! come play inside! its so fun! forget your boring life! join us!' I realised they kept saying those words, "Join Us" How odd! When I woke up there was fog outside... and... inside... I noticed Tim Was gone and the closet was open. I screamed, Tim Was Gone
I Was Alone,
Then Tim Came Out of the Closet
He Laughed Saying 'Why Are There little girls dresses in here... and why is there a woman screaming on our bed!' I straighten up my face before saying 'I heard voices... last night... saying... Join Us!' I shuddered at the thought of Kira.

Tim stopped laughing 'Join us.' He didn't laugh like he usually would after a joke. 'Thank you for letting us out. Not sure i agree with this thing... That girl looks nice' I screamed as he stepped closer. He was at arms length when he broke into a smile. I started crying 'That Wasnt Cool Dude!' He looked confused 'That was a good one though wasnt it?' He Joked. I broke into a smile and started laughing with him.

He grabbed me 'I stay up tonight to look after you!' he said in a serious manner. I nodded


Night Came and i heard the voices. 'Tim was mean about us. you will pay. Its fun being us. all you have to give up is Tim.' As They said that glowing pink gas started filling the room. I tried not to breath it in but i had one little gasp and my brain collapsed and i started sucking it in like i was really thirsty. My body got up as my soul was trapped inside. I screamed to get out but i couldn't. I slumped down in my body, waiting to see what was in the closet... Tim grabbed me. he pulled me out of the house 'what was that gas!??!' He asked 'Wait... Is your soul asleep and your Body awake? that stuff... was it coming from the closet...' He pondered. 'Thank you' I muttered before i became once again unconscious.

When i woke up Tim ran to me. I was in my room. I looked at the closet... Sealed off... Good Riddance! 'Tim... Thank you!' He laughed. 'For What!?!?' Its going to get you he said to me through his eyes. I teared up 'Goodbye' I Muttered. 

That last night I went to bed and walked towards the closet. I stepped in and saw the girls. Holding a bottle of pills and a knife. I ate the pills and fell asleep. 

Now? Im Burried Alive. My brain is asleep and my soul cant get out...

Join Us...

Its Not That Bad

 

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A previous user commented:
Doesn't sound too good either! Yikes, this is creepy. Looove it

 

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