I Can't write anymore .....
publication by:
Taha Hassan
Written
on Jan 21, 2018
I think I lost my ability to write ... till now I havent told anyone but eversince I've been broken that part of me seems ..... dead. My mind works fine ... my creativity is fine ... I just .... feel painfully empty when I sit to write something ..... as if I remember how it used to be to be able to write ..... but that part of me is torn out .... As a missing organ .... I can feel it ... I can feel that it is missing .... I can feel that that fire has extinguished .... there was a time when someone used to rekindle the flame in my heart ... but I don't think I deserved it ..... Only if I knew what I needed to fix myself ..... I'm not even sure I am fixable now .... Thankyou for reading ... -T
Tags: Sad, Depressing, Pain, Dark, Deep,
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Chris Cleverly commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 2:16am
nice work This poem says to me that all though uncertain, the writer can indeed still write.
Taha Hassan
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 6:14am
This isnt a poem ...... I said I can't write poems anymore .... did you even read ...?
Chris Cleverly
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 6:35am
my mistake sorry. can you please delete both this and my other comment from here. much appreciated
Ari J
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 10:11am
I feel the same! I feel there's so much I have to say and would love to write about in my poems but my mind goes blank x
Frank Hornby .
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 10:23am
....did you even read....? Why the sarcastic comment? .....Mr "knows a bit about everything,". ........
Taha Hassan
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 10:35am
Because I'm broken now Frank ... I'm broken .... not Mr. Perfect anymore
Frank Hornby .
commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 11:49am
......I'm sorry to hear that Taha..........be strong.....good luck Taha.......
Christopher Russon
commented on Nov 24, 2018 at 10:50am
A publication nevertheless it is still is a poem .Poems don't have to rhyme.
