DP Carroll Edit

poem by: Miss Ann Ominous
Written on Aug 16, 2020

I like poems hymns and carols, 
I did until your name popped up 
the same lyrics with a new title, 
Same context and shuffled sentences. 
If you love her so much canâ€™t you pay her more attention.
This poetic repetition makes me want to start a petition. Canâ€™t you move on to Reddit Someone there may appreciate your edits

Tags: Riddle, Metaphor, Love, Sad, Weird, Wishful,

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Frank Hornby . commented on Aug 17, 2020 at 7:10am

You are so right.....His repetition of devotion...is driving me to despair!....I can't sleep at night! ...I'm pulling out my hair! ...the same old words..again, and again, and again!....I CAN'T TAKE ANY MORE!!....I'M GOING INSANE!..ðŸ¤¡ðŸ¤¡ðŸ¤¡ðŸ¤¡ðŸ¤¡...HahaHeeheeHAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!.............no wait..I'm alright now....ðŸ˜‚

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