He said the word Hello.

poem by: Christopher Russon
Written on Feb 23, 2019

He wondered up towards the bar
He said the word Hello
An angry face looked at him
He received an awful blow.
He went crashing into tables
Then landed on the floor
Glasses smashed and broken
His chin felt rather sore.
Those blows they kept on coming
One two three and more
He saw the chance and took it
He just ran towards the door.
The whole thing was alarming
He couldn't help but think
He was only trying to be friendly
When ordering himself a drink.
Then again he had to wonder 
About that dreadful place
She may of looked a stunner
But her manners a disgrace .
 

 

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Talal Uddin commented on Feb 24, 2019 at 2:40pm
A well-written poem indeed. Keep it up, Russon.
Christopher Russon commented on Feb 24, 2019 at 3:00pm
Thank you Talal just a funny one for a change Pleased you liked it.
Frank Hornby . commented on Feb 25, 2019 at 10:27pm
Anything can happen if you have one too many.....love the imagery in this poem...
Christopher Russon commented on Feb 26, 2019 at 9:09pm
Thanks Frank .just a fun poem .
Michael Wise commented on Mar 05, 2019 at 8:58pm
Great clever twist at the end! Love it!
Christopher Russon commented on Mar 05, 2019 at 11:55pm
Thanks Michael a bit of a funny story behind this poem.

 

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