My Rib

poem by: Jay Shades
Written on Sep 08, 2018

All the good you do will never erase your past.
So let's celebrate your future .
Cheers to every thing coming your way.
On the other hand you could of went many routes of fukeries.
You stayed the course and so far it is the right way. 
If God used Adams rib to make eve, it shows that we are the same created beings two halves of a whole . 
My weaknesses are complimented by your strenghts.
We work and fit together perfectly .
Alone your a beauty to behold but together we are something far stronger, far more magnificent than any of us could be alone . 
So I lost a rib but gained so much more . 

 

Tags: Happy, Love, Hope, Wishful, Deep,

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Halley Davis commented on Sep 22, 2018 at 9:54pm
A nicely written poem, thanks for your post.

 

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