THE VOICE OF NATURE
poem by:
Fadrian Bartley
Written
on Aug 30, 2018
I travelled to a mountain And experience the beautiful creations with curving fountains Trees that dance with the traveling winds, And flying fowls how lovely they sings, I sat upon a rock, And all the things that crawls have me flocked Birds with beautiful colors Illuminating sunshine in the evening hours, All trees of different characters Was the resting places for flying vultures, Running waters slipping through cave rocks With blast of thunder above the mountain top, The river stood still where ducks and lilies rest With vine and thorn between clutches That’s where they made their nest, View of the cities With bloomy fields and grains, Expression of fog displayed above the open plains, Cows and goats all gathered in heaps, Are like bundles of a thousand merry sheeps, Fountains of waters settled by brooks remain shallow, I then realized that nature expressed itself with the sounds of sparrows
Tags: Happy, Rhyme, Inspirational,
Add Comment
Halley Davis commented on Sep 22, 2018 at 9:58pm
Hi, great poem, I love it, but i did notice a few typos and accidents.
You speak in past tense in the first line and last two, while you speak presently in the rest of the poem, line 5 and 6 cut flow, as well. But great poem
