A previous user
commented on May 13, 2018 at 12:24am
People tend to avoid the eye of the storm. And once you're there it's hard to leave.
Nice poem.
Michael Wise
commented on May 13, 2018 at 1:40am
Thank u my friend!
Frank Hornby .
commented on May 13, 2018 at 8:47am
Nice poem..it flowed like the waves gently lapping onto a desert island beach......🌴
Michael Wise
commented on May 13, 2018 at 11:20am
Very poetically put Frank! Thank u!
Christopher Russon
commented on Dec 11, 2018 at 9:11pm
Beautifully written Mike.I have a facination with islands.
Michael Wise
commented on Dec 11, 2018 at 11:29pm
That's cool, Chris! Thank u!
Frank Hornby .
commented on Dec 12, 2018 at 9:29am
This poem plays with my imagination...like a good poem should...I see through the metaphor Mike...and I feel the sadness..
A previous user
commented on Dec 13, 2018 at 4:58pm
Just read this again. Well written Micheal. Very deep :)
Michael Wise
commented on Dec 14, 2018 at 8:14pm
Yes Frank, there was sadness there when I wrote it, to a degree there still is. But there's also a strange peacefulness as well.
Michael Wise
commented on Dec 14, 2018 at 8:15pm
Glad you came back for a second read, A Slow!