John Rodie
commented:
Even though i may not agree with the sentiment I like the references and use of others words within your own. But it isn't a sonnet! Though still a well written poem thanks
Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Thanks for your comments. I suspected that not all would agree with me on this rather contentious subject. That's alright. I thought I had written a Shakespearian sonnet I.e. 14 lines of iambic pentameter with the rhyming pattern: a b a b c d c d e f e f g g. Am I wrong?
Raychill Ellisonwonderland
commented:
Some of the words you use make me have to get out my dictionary. This is great! You are not only sharing such powerful imagery, you are helping to expand my language skills. thank you
Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Thanks Raychill.
When young it came to my attention that my vocabulary was limited, and I took to carrying a small dictionary with me. So keep that dictionary handy.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely way of writing would you like to edit my poems Geoffrey.Just kidding but you do write
Well.