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Very good poem. Your writing has a very nice touch of providing descriptive elements throughout the verses. Great expression. (and not overdone in any way)....Concise and to the point.
Geoffrey Brewer
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Thanks for the feedback. Glad you liked it
Annie Kirby
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This took me on an enchanting adventure! Thank you!
Maria Williams
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Oh but to soar like an eagle or enjoy the excitement of the tiny martins. What a wonderful place to encourage tolerance where racism has no place. Thanks for sharing