Cecilia Crasto
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The old adage, "think before you speak" is a good one to follow, at least you apologize, some never do...good poem.
Christopher Russon
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Good well written poem.
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Thank you both. Life's lessons are valuable but sometimes a tough pill to swallow.
Ari J
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Nice!
Shanta
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Without design, impossible to build anything.
Roxanne Dubarry
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Speaking your mind is all very fine. Turning your problems over to God really helps.
Rod Moffat
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If you consistently speak your mind and speak from the heart you will do me for a friend.
Your chosen rhyming words have impact and meaning and the structure to me has a balanced rhythm. Good one.
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Thanks everyone. Roxanne, everyone has the right to believe or not believe regarding spiritual matters. My interpretation of God may differ from yours but it doesn't lessen my convictions. Rod, to your point, I am finding out in life if you are true to yourself and live with honesty, you become trustworthy and more identifiable to others 👌
Annie Kirby
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Be true to yourself and you can't go wrong. A very good honest poem!
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Thanks Annie
Edward shields
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Sounds like a self conflick?
Nicho Mose
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trick is : i placed a checkpoint between my thoughts and my tongue, with my heart standing guard.