Sea High
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There's an almost childlike sense of wonder in your poems, beautiful :)
A previous user
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I love the rhyme. We should never grow too old to fly a kite.
Christopher Russon
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Lovely poem.I like flying kites.
Geoffrey Brewer
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A lovely word picture of innocent beauty.
Edward shields
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Great feelings in your poem.
Maria Williams
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How vividly you've captured the imagination, I could almost see those kites of red ,blue and white.Love it.
Cecilia Crasto
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Thank you everyone for your kind comments, I do appreciate them.
Frank Hornby .
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Lovely poem Cecilia.....everyone likes watching kites flitting about the sky.....
ann parks
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I'm right there on the beach with him .....wonderful!