Christopher Russon
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Very power full words to your poem.
True there are those who use there position for there own gains.
They I'll not escape justice from God.Well written.
Tony Anderson
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Awesome write
Sun Chaser
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Beautiful and full of pain. It's not easy to rhyme and keep the feelings there,the right word is important,but this was done well. Coupled with a true "Evil" that lurks in this dark world.
Geoffrey Brewer
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Extraordinary poem clearly and powerfully exposing an evil. It is shocking that wicket people have been able to penetrate all of the major religions of the world, but seems to be a pattern in human life.
Frank Hornby .
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I felt the pain in those words........your pain?.....
Ashok Pokharel
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It is really a brilliant piece of work. So simple and beautiful. The heading is captivating. Overall it is lovely.
Cecilia Crasto
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Thanks to everyone who commented, this poem was read two years ago on a radio station in Sydney and the announcer said that he felt my pain but,no it wasn't my pain, if I'd been a victim I don't think I could have written about it. Many are still embarrassed to speak up and I hope they know that we feel their pain, if that is possible!
A previous user
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Wow! Such a violation by those who use god as a mask to practice their deviant behavior. So sad. Very good poem
Paris Marceau
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Very strong emotions felt here, good ryhmming too.
Nicho Mose
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Excellent! Keep spreading the word.
Frank Hornby .
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I'm so glad it wasn't personal.......but I think it is therapeutic to write down, and share ones painful events in life.......really powerful poem Cecilia...it moved me to tears......