love
poem by:
Ty Dagreatest
Written
on Aug 18, 2013
love,what is love?love is a blurr in a sense its blind it clouds your vision and controlls your mind;love is blood,sweat and tears you measure the days,months and years...love exist but is rarely seen its like a planet far off or a dream!it fuels on trust without is none it runs deeper than blood in vains that run love is hurt love is joy for love is real but not a toy love is morethan sex and words,if actions speak...then they will be heard the moral of this poem if you dont already know just let love be seen becus words do not show.
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greg woods commented:
very good
Milton Robertson
commented:
You hit the nail on the head. Outstanding
Christopher Russon
commented:
Good way of discring love.
Candy Flash
commented:
Your prom caught my attention!!Nice work!!!
Roxanne Dubarry
commented:
I think you need to more careful about spelling and typos'. morethan should be changed to more than becus needs to be changed to because. You wrote a good poem.
Shanta
commented:
You don't have the slightest idea about love!
Frank Hornby .
commented:
dagreatest, really??
