Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely poem.
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
Thanks so much
Mac Daddy
commented:
It doesn't all rhyme but you obviously know that: most of it does and then you say whatever you want.
It's got confidence.
It's got a lyric!
I think some might say it's got a broken rhythm... Yeh, it's good!
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
I know it doesn't have rhythm all the way and my writing is a broken rhythm because i like it that way. I write my poems based off what i have experienced or have seen happen before in my life. But thanks anyway for your feedback , i appreciate it.
Shanta
commented:
Yes, we're pure energy - consciousness - not a beautifully dressed broomstick!
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
Excuse Me!!! and your point is???
Lakiesha Cole
commented:
Nice, I can relate to this poem. God created us in all different shapes and sizes. We are fearfully and wonderful made!