Unsaid struggles
poem by:
Mirza Doe
Written
on Oct 12, 2016
Im afraid of whats to come, is this the end or has it just begun? I need a friend that can understand, what it feels like to be a broken man, when i close my eyes, I see a destiny, dont know if its mine or god testing me, i see this idea of love, stuck between my ego and not doing enough.
Tags: rhyme, depressing, deep, confused, pain,
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Cecilia Crasto commented:
You definitely need a loyal friend and I hope you find one...good poem
Paul Stephens
commented:
Hi Mirza, I've been a broken man and I can relate to what you are saying. I found a true and loyal friend but before I could do that I had to find myself. Keep your chin up and be proud of who you are and the rest will happen.
A previous user
commented:
Keep writing! The teacher is always quiet during the test. Your OK
Christopher Russon
commented:
Honist hearted poem.l have never been a broken man but self esteem I lack even now.
Poetry is my tonic.Lovely poem.
Chris Cleverly
commented:
Great poem,its nice to read something that feels real
Robert Kohlhammer
commented:
A concise poem that reaches out to the way of ones feelings with a sense of well explained thoughts.
