Frank Hornby .
commented on Jan 30, 2018 at 9:45am
........he won't.....
Fadrian Bartley
commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 6:55pm
lovely
The Wave Poet
commented on Feb 16, 2018 at 2:29pm
The pain was deeply reflected in this poem, your words brought this feeling of confusion and sad hope to life. I really like how you write your poems, keep it up Shaffiate!
shaffiate ishmael
commented on Feb 16, 2018 at 7:44pm
thank you very much
Frank Hornby .
commented on Mar 09, 2018 at 9:59am
......I watched my mother endure years of abuse!!............I vowed I would stop it one day!!........I beat the shit out of my step "father" when I was 16yrs old!!............the coward never touched her again!!...........that was the best "medicine," I could give him!!.........so all the "I'm sorry babe, it won't happen again", is bullshit!!.............reading that poem again, brought anger, and tears to my eyes............that is a powerful poem.......