The World Is An Open Book
poem by:
Ronell Warren Alman
Written
on Jan 17, 2018
The world is an open book When you continue to grab education You obtain valuable knowledge What a bright sensation The mind is an essential tool Utilize it wisely Be that sage person Who articulates succinctly
Tags: Rhyme, Inspirational, Encouraging, Hope, Wishful,
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k river commented on Jul 26, 2020 at 9:42pm
Hi
Your poem, has a really good overall premise and the rhyme is fine up until the last three lines. Because of the word "tool" the other two lines that need a rhyme ending would be very easy to do. The other thing you need to keep in mind is the syllable count. The syllable count is what determines the overall flow and polish of the poem. The place to go to learn about how to write poetry totally for free is the web site:
all poetry.com
They offer a wide choice of different types of free poetry classes, I have taken two of them. They are both fun and can be very challenging at the same time. I believe the beginning poetry class and its successor have helped me tremendously in my writing endeavors. I am sure it will help you too. The classes are well worth the effort in the end. The wisdom that is freely offered, is open to anyone interested in working to obtain it. Remember, any wisdom that you work hard for, are able to gain and then apply that actual knowledge to your life is: priceless.
I look forward to becoming good friends with you and reading your critiques of my poetry or prose as submitted work.
Best regards,
K River
