Robert Kohlhammer
commented:
To quote a comment that I have heard before, ``it feels as if the worlds troubles are only just beginning´´. A deep and well written poem.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Well written poem Cecilia.things in the world are escalating
Will they ever get better I wonder.
Frank Hornby .
commented:
That's a powerful poem Cecilia....it paints a picture, that I'm reluctant to look at......but alas your words are so true...and so sad..
Ja Ja
commented:
Terror and despair expressed with such feeling.
This world surely needs a whole lot of healing.
Thank you for sharing
Ellen early
commented on Sep 23, 2017 at 3:01am
You speak the truth in this sad rhyme, the message reminds me to count my blessings
Anna Tate
commented on Sep 23, 2017 at 8:06am
Good work
Arch Angel
commented on Oct 23, 2017 at 5:09am
Nice ryhming. As well as the message.
Cecilia Crasto
commented on Oct 24, 2017 at 10:01pm
Thanks to everyone who took the time to read and comment, it is much appreciated.
Taha Hassan
commented on Oct 25, 2017 at 3:27am
Paints a perfect picture of a War ongoing. Perfect and will-shattering. -T