Nature's Realm
poem by:
Dan Miltz
Written
on Feb 19, 2017
The earthy, barmy, leafs scurry Pull'ng rapidly, in peak flurry Lamenting blind, as mists worry Crude, cool, calm earth, attacks slowly Silly, calmy breeze, shoo wholly Sharp plume, vanishes hollowly Descending riveted cloud gleam Sputtering upon scratching stream Hurries vacant, in sprinkling steam Lying oaks bewail 'n bemoan Giggling delicately, unknown On the clear red foundlings, windblown Deciduous elm trees fluster As slow clouds be, one of cluster Slowly, dis'ppears in a duster Suavity, forlorn, pebbles grieve Among slugg'sh, buttermilk sky heave Stars twinkl' thru' soupy vapor retrieve © daniel miltz
Tags: Imagery, Encouraging, Faith, Happy,
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Arch Angel commented:
Put punctuations in appropriate places.
Arch Angel
commented:
I love the message; the usage of impressive words is correct but the grammatical position, some aren't.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely poem I love the way the words captures the feeling of nature.
