Soggy Biscuit

poem by: Jay Shades
Written on Sep 29, 2016

When you dip me do I taste better?
from time to time I might drop in your brew
Am not purposely doing it. 
If anyone's to blame it's you, 
you're the one leaving me long enough in there.
You pulled me out that pack but left my brothers
Am not different to any of them,
wish I could go back.
What is life when am awaiting your dunking flexes?
You don't care, cause once am gone it's on to the next
Do you ever feel like a soggy biscuit?



Tags: deep, confused, weird,

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Valerie Russon commented on Oct 05, 2017 at 7:36pm
I like it it is weird but it is imaginative of being a biscuit a soggy one at that,
Jay Shades commented on Oct 12, 2017 at 12:10pm
Thank you, I was at a soggy place in my life LOL.
Fadrian Bartley commented on Feb 06, 2018 at 2:19pm
i like this even tho with its twist


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