Christopher Russon
commented:
Wow paddy. Like this one .
I have just taken up walking.
Doctors orders
Paddy Mchale
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Paddy Mchale
commented:
Thank you for that I think my poems are so inspired by the weather it seems to breed creativity
ann parks
commented:
Thanks so much......lovely poem
Josh Frye
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Walk to feel the earth under your feet. Great way to put it,and insight into a simple walk.I would play around with imagery. Look up all different styles of poems mabey you could make a few versions of this
Emily Armstrong
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There's definitely something about a walk that allows you to lose yourself in the moment and escape I love this poem!
Valerie Russon
commented on Sep 30, 2017 at 10:25pm
it is a good poem and yes we can escape while we are walking that is true.