If Heaven Had Visiting Days...

poem by: Charde' Ridgeway
Written on Jan 29, 2016

  If Only Heaven Had Visiting Days 
 I would come see you every single day
   Just to hear your voice again
   Just to see your smile again
 God knows how much i miss you so
  But god doesn't make mistakes
  Only if heaven had visiting days
   I could hug you once more 
 And hear you say my child you are my everything
Your my light, my smile, my motivation 
 You are the reason why i push forward in life

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Q. Ramirez commented:

Great concept, I would visit my grandparents, uncles, aunts and nephews. Like it.

Charde' Ridgeway commented:

Thanks so much, i decided to write this poem for my grandmother who passed away from cancer. Thanks for commenting

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Christopher Russon commented:

Nice poem.l wrote a poem for my father who sadly passed away 2 years ago I liked your poem.

Shanta commented:

True - God created you and He created nothing else!

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Ann Sdono commented:

Sad. Very nice

Fauxcroft wade commented:

Beautiful

Lakiesha Cole commented:

Nice poem! If heaven had a visiting day, I probably wouldn't want to come back here. God would tell me girl go back to the earth I have work for you to do!

Charde' Ridgeway commented:

Thanks everyone for the great feedback!!!!

Godfrey Georges commented:

i lost my daughter and my brother. it would be nice see them again.

Frank Hornby . commented on May 19, 2018 at 5:56pm

I'd be outside those gates every morning at opening time.......just to give a few hugs out .......lovely thought Charde....

k river commented on Jul 27, 2020 at 7:36am

Hi Charde',I sure would enjoy a Heaven's visiting day. I wouldn't want to come back no way that's why I wouldn't be able to just go for a visit. I will eventually get there all in GOD'S timing not mine. Now then as for your poem, I think it reads well, however, there are two slight grammatical errors. 1. "God" needs to be capitalized the second time it is used 2. last line the "I" needs to be capitalized. Best regards, K River

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