You Will Survive
poem by:
D'Vina Dietrich
Written
on Apr 20, 2015
Look at you just a child. Playing around, smiling. Like a untamed animal.. so wild. You don't know what is ahead of you, Just enjoy this moment. Go ahead kick off your shoes. I see how you ignore the crazy. You don't understand though, You are jus a baby. Soon you'll see everything, But don't let it change you. Keep away the chaos and pain. Something I should of done. This life is unbearable, Never was there time for fun. Please don't be like me, It's a ugly way to live. Can't you see? I want you to be happy. Embrace life, and succeed Truth is life isnt to sappy. I took the wrong trail. My life is dark, it's scary I am just a big fail. You're young, still got a chance. I will guide you, You'll never enter my trance. As long as im alive, I'll make sure you remain pure Be happy, you will survive.
Tags: sad, love, metaphor, hope, dark,
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Marc Damian commented:
Dayumm deep and sad. Nice!
D'Vina Dietrich
commented:
Thanks (:
Edward fabela
commented:
Beautiful, it paints a picture.
Edward fabela
commented:
Beautiful, it paints a picture.
chris sheppard
commented:
love your poem, message me
Roxanne Dubarry
commented:
jus=just. It's okay. im=I'm. Typos, or creative poetry?
The younger generation needs to be guided by their elders.
My own life has taken many wrong trails!
Sun Chaser
commented:
Sad and honest,like a fallen soul that has found a reason to stand again.
Christopher Russon
commented:
As a parent I just hope my doughter takes the right trail in life.Lovely poem.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 7:22am
excellent
