Rhyme Rant on Pondrin...Written on Pondrin....Oops

poem by: Mr. Chap
Written on Apr 14, 2015

I don't mean to hit pondrin with a hockey puck
But this site kinda really does suck
I know I rhyme in lazy ways
But in order not to waste your time

Let's move on to another line

It takes really really long just to sign in
And by the time it loads I already put my computer in the trash bin
Ok, I admit, that was a slight exaggeration
But there is even more to fuel my aggravation

Sometimes when I hit back a few times for my own objective mission
It sends me to a screen that I think says "requires form re-submission"
Ok, I don't remember exactly what it says
But it isn't any good, even if you...put on a fez, I guess?
Hey, I'm trying to rhyme here, give me a break
Don't be a lime, be a lemon, and give me some time
And cake..make that lemon...I really love lemons:P

When I edit my poem I come back to see all my tags to be gone
And it really surely definitely doesn't make me too fond
Although I don't really care for the tags as such
And I really shouldn't tear into the fact too much
I don't care, cause it's still the website's mistake
And all these feelings expressed are true not fake

This all concludes this pointless rant
I would like to keep going but I really can't 
Of course I'm not writing this on the demon site itself
Because that for certain wouldn't be right








 

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Samantha Cruz commented:
i really thought this poem was really cool
Dan Murphy commented:
Awesome! hahaha
Frank Hornby . commented on Nov 27, 2017 at 1:33pm
Moaning old goat!.........hahaha......

 

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