Trevor Cartwright
commented:
That's a sad poem man! I hope that I am not interpreting it too literally, but is it about someone who is paralyzed? Is there a deeper meaning that I am missing?
michael mowbray
commented:
Yeah it's sad, it's more metaphorical about a fella feeling like he needs this girl who he isn't good enough for, he his trapped with contradiction.
louise bridges
commented:
I love this!
Christopher Russon
commented:
This poem makes for a good song.Very good lyrics even though sad story.Well written
Frank Hornby .
commented on Apr 06, 2018 at 9:37am
Very moving poem Michael........